Many people find it hard to balance their work with other parts of their lives. What are the reasons for this. How can this problem be overcome.
The government and citizens of countries sometimes have contrasting views about whether people should spend more time at office or they should pay more time for leisure and physical activities. In this essay, an attempt will be made to explain the causes of hectic life as well as to solve this issues.
On the one hand, there are numerous researchers who feel that in today's era it is much difficult to find better accommodations, jobs and societies. But, they always claim that family is just an important plays the major role in human beings life. Firstly, in the contemporary era most of the individuals who hold a lot of interest to earn more money so that they always ready to compromise with life for this reason that have preferred to live away from hometown and lack the knowledge of cooking skill. This is illustrated by the fact that, in the global, around 60 percent of international business who had migrated in every year from own country to other nation for studying and working so for that they face more issues during the each day like it is extremely hard manage to study and work sulatenously.
On the other hand, some experts belief that in the 21st century public holidays and weekends are more effective way to reduce the burden of work. Thus, they get a more chances to spend their own quality time with family and friends then they are able to improve the relationship. A recent study showed that in India, last year one of the most eminent and highly esteemed apple cellphone industry which had more enthusiastic gave holidays to their own workers for a month then they were able to enjoy the time with family. Moreover, the main motive of holidays that citizens motivate and excited to join the yoga, zumba and gym classes thus, they are eligible to improve health.
In conclusion, it is indeed the fact that jobs are part of the society. But, they can not able to manage schedule for other activities. It is believed so there are so many ways to be discovered to tackle this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 204, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'play'?
Suggestion: play
... claim that family is just an important plays the major role in human beings life. Fi...
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Line 2, column 234, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
...important plays the major role in human beings life. Firstly, in the contemporary era ...
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Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'experts'' or 'expert's'?
Suggestion: experts'; expert's
... sulatenously. On the other hand, some experts belief that in the 21st century public ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, as to, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6676056338 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45677409232 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557746478873 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.646017007 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.461538462 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3076923077 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22084013828 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727455654682 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445497614779 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1334671006 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359911526671 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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