Many people keep pets.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of keeping pets for individuals and for society?
It is an indisputable fact that more and more people raise pets. I strongly believe that the detrimental effects are eclipsed by the beneficial ones in term of individuals and the society.
Perhaps the strongest arguments is that the benefits do have several potential cost related to be individuals and society. Looking first at the former, welcoming pets into their home, which contribute to receive an influx of both responsibility and obligation are taken into account. This is because owner’s pets need to regular clean their environment such as cage and carry for them with priority of veterinary attention from time to time. For society, a major disadvantage is that compassion animals are able to put ourselves in danger since diseases from them could jump to humans anytime if people do not check up their healthy issues for a long time.
Notwithstanding the aforementioned arguments, I hold belief that owning pets can be far more advantageous. On individual level, some studies indicated that several companion animals like cats and dogs help him to release stress and then develop companionship to lonely him. Indeed, the owner’s pets have a tendency to improve mental well-being by craving for attention and affection. About the societal level, people carrying for pets in general might adore them, this could lead to better treatment of animals including farm and wild animals with full of respect for animal rights. As the result, they would have a good insight about affection of virtually other species. This is bound to have a knock-on effect for society.
In conclusion, the positive effects of keeping pets are far greater than the disadvantages involved in both for individuals and for society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, then, well, in conclusion, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21863799283 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8801597086 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4387361264 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296391398718 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954239993472 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892030098629 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193446589142 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0993466884419 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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