Many people living in cities these days do not get enough physical exercise.
What are the causes of this?
What are some possible solutions?
People in the countryside had less technology than the city. They had to do everything with their own hands. As almost every work is menial work, we had to use our force which is similar to exercising. But people living in cities are surrounded by technology which was invented to make life more convenient. For this reason, citizens seem to get less exercise than the standard.
Some people don’t know how important exercising is for our health. They refuse to do it properly. Citizens consider that time is running out and we have to spend every second worth. Due to the priority, many people have no time for exercising. Even if there are many gyms, they find that it’s hard to go there. There are also many cases in which they did extreme exercises and stopped after a few days passed.
To solve this problem, people should change the way they think. Everyone should allocate at least 3 hours for exercising time per week. If it is not convenient to go to gyms, there are online classes or videos which can also teach you how to exercise. In addition, the easiest way to do exercise is walking. It is necessary to move your own body instead of working in the same position all day.
In conclusion, this is a personal problem which people have to solve by themself. Lack of exercise causes health problems and many following problems. It is important to realize how important exercise is and to get enough exercise.While healthy people don't need to worry about sickness and can live happily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, while, at least, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7196969697 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49291926557 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0668608902 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.5789473684 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8947368421 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241160923819 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707190869093 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04496493663 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145783134834 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396409673555 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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