Many people no longer read newspapers or watch TV news programmes. Instead they get news about the world from the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, the Internet is becoming more and more popular and widely used so people tends to get news about the world from it instead of using tradition ways such as reading newspaper or watching TV news programs. And this has two faces: positive and negative. About positive, first of all, it is undeniable that getting news from Internet is convenient and useful for everyone, especially busy people but they also want to upgrade daily news. For example, in the morning, we have many things which need to be prepared without time to read newspapers or watch TV news programs, we can search the Internet and find the daily news on the phone when we are free. Secondly, we can read news from the Internet of the skipped day and we can read every news we want. For instance, we can not watch TV news programs today, tomorrow will have different news and we will not rewatch. But we can do it with the Internet when just searching the day of that news. Besides, when watching news on TV, we can not skip the news that we do not like to watch the news we need but in the Internet we just search the name of the news we want. It will help us save time. In contrast, there are some negative things in getting news from Internet. Firstly, the news through the Internet, we need to find carefully because of the harmful news affected to ourselves. For example, in the morning, when reading news but unluckily, the appearance of negative news will destroy our day because it affect to our emotion. Secondly, some news in the Internet is not official and unchecked, which makes us misunderstanding information. This leads to bad results for us and for people known this information from us. For example, watching an advertising news about any product from the Internet, we can buy because of the desired result. Unluckily, we buy fake product, it can harm to our health. Finally, reading news from the Internet is not as comfortable as reading newspapers because the screen is small and the write in the newspapers is bigger and clear. In conclusion, getting news from the Internet or the TV or reading newspapers has positive and negative faces. Importantly we know how to balance to get the best information with ourselves.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1467, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
...ve news will destroy our day because it affect to our emotion. Secondly, some news in ...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 1978, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...spapers because the screen is small and the write in the newspapers is bigger and clear. ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65306122449 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5408982857 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.418367346939 0.561755894193 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5809756734 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6315789474 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73684210526 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439942629434 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174001295439 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114873566668 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.439942629434 0.151304729494 291% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1467, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
...ve news will destroy our day because it affect to our emotion. Secondly, some news in ...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 1978, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...spapers because the screen is small and the write in the newspapers is bigger and clear. ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65306122449 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5408982857 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.418367346939 0.561755894193 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5809756734 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6315789474 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73684210526 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439942629434 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174001295439 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114873566668 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.439942629434 0.151304729494 291% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.