Many people nowadays tend to marry and have children in their thirties rather than at a younger age.
Is this a positive or negative development?
There is no doubt that there has been an increase in the number of people getting married in their thirties and above. From my perspective, It is a beneficial social change since older parents are more likely to be financially stable and fully mature to raise their kids properly.
On the one hand, it is explicable why some people would oppose this new development. Firstly, health is one of the difficulties that need to be concerned about late marriage. It is believed that it would be more difficult for older women to give birth, and several health problems can occur to them during pregnancy. For instance, some studies have shown a greater chance of miscarriage in older mothers; in addition, higher blood pressure is also a concerning factor that can prevent the successful delivery of babies. Furthermore, there can be higher chances of their newborns facing more health-related risks compared to others.
Despite the aforementioned challenges, the positive benefits of getting married late are undeniable. In general, most parents in their 30s, already have a well-paid job and a stable career, which allows them to provide for their children with good healthcare and comprehensive education. By contrast, most parents who are in the initial phase of their career, usually run into financial difficulties if they have a child. Moreover, older parents are prepared to deal with some challenges coming along in building a family. To be specific, they are able to handle their children’s temper tantrums more effectively with patience and love.
In conclusion, although there are certain risks related to health complications, being a parent later in life may bring about several positives to not only the children but also the parents.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in general, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21554770318 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8457671269 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597173144876 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.445689042 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.538461538 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147248681414 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539530817329 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449745732187 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874822843439 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358195531667 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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