Many people regard film as less important art forms than literature and paintings.
To what extent do you agree o disagree?
It is true that arts play a greater importance on how we preserve our cultural heritage. Some people believe that traditional arts such as literature and paintings are the most important, I believe that film is the most valuable art form.
To begin with, many people regarded film as a public art because it is the most popular art form. It is the only art form that is entertaining and can be easily comprehended. For example, the study made in Queensland University revealed that the majority of the students had a positive experience in watching a movie than visiting a museum. This happens due to the fact that it is not particularly difficult to interpret the art value in the movie and that the expression of emotion can be readily conveyed. In contrast, if a cinema is not a place of art, the only place that we can express our emotion is in the museum which is less interesting.
Furthermore, a film can be considered as a combination of several art forms. Unlike old forms of art namely literature, poems, paintings, and novels, a film combines some art medium such as performance art, visual art, and modern art making it a multi-art. For instance, in the recent UK survey, most of the respondents voted film watching as their favorite leisure time than reading novels. This clearly supports that film has been the most effective way of expressing art.
In conclusion, although there are other ways to express our emotions through arts, I believe that most popular and effective art form is still the film because it is well supported by many people and it has the combination of a medium.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and it has the combination of a medium.
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Discourse Markers used:
['furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast', 'such as', 'it is true', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243506493506 0.247107183377 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.155844155844 0.155533422707 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100649350649 0.0946595960268 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0519480519481 0.0501214627716 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0487012987013 0.0437548338989 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136363636364 0.122226691241 112% => OK
Participles: 0.038961038961 0.0403226058552 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76611927008 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.012987012987 0.0326793684256 40% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.11038961039 0.0861772015684 128% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.012987012987 0.021408717616 61% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00974025974026 0.011925033212 82% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1610.0 1933.35771543 83% => OK
No of words: 280.0 316.048096192 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.321428571429 0.374742101984 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.264285714286 0.28420135186 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.178571428571 0.203846283523 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117857142857 0.137316102897 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76611927008 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.037074148 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.56093040696 92% => OK
Word variations: 50.5123706801 60.7387585426 83% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 23.3333333333 20.7743622355 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6286952323 49.517814964 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.166666667 127.492653851 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7743622355 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 49.7619047619 49.1944974215 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.63291139241 1.69124875643 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211949452916 0.332605444948 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.165574521381 0.102741220458 161% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0776347546479 0.0668466124924 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.635082222463 0.534860350844 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155223737683 0.148594505496 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107184262749 0.134430193775 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795166906151 0.0742795772207 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.332811825712 0.324371583561 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0397878752225 0.0638462369009 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157326354253 0.228012699653 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529603992351 0.058150111329 91% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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