There are opinions saying that movie is insignificant compare to book or painting as an art form. Regarding the statement above, I strongly disagree because film is made with joint effort from many people and is also a combination of sounds and image and other medias. This, in turn, helps to better convey emotion and message to the audiences,
On one hand, a movie is prodiced by a group of people. These people are mainly the writter, scriptor, director and most important, the actors. Therefore, for a film to be succesful, they must all work as a team and they must all work very hard. For the actors, this means spending hours of rehearsal, practice and multiple failures to show the character personalities, lifes and struggle. In some way, they are living someone else lives to the fullest in order to express differents stages of emotion that resonate with the audiences heart and soul. For some, films are the best way to represent the culture, lifestyle of a community.
On the other hand, many means are used in movies to create the most vivid, lively experience. These are the soundtracts, dialouges, motions and the overal invironments. Many movies even take a step further to make a whole new place that could not be found on earth using the power of technology and speacial effects. For instance, the movie “Star wars” talks about wars and story in the future when aliens and humans fight in space. It is regarded as a mastepiece that have been a novelty experience for people growing up.
Overall, films are great pieces of art that help create unforgetable memories for those who watch. Compare to literature or paintings, movies are beautifull message made by a group of enthusiaste and combined medias that make it even more enjoyable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
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Suggestion: audiences'; audience's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86378737542 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62179927048 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601328903654 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2162575813 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141715022603 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439489980163 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474387118289 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091447527051 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595747123953 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.