Many people say that health services should be provided by the government and should be freely available. Others argue that only privatised health care can provide good quality health services. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Health is one of the matters capturing the great concerns from citizens globally. It is believed that governments had better make medical care accessible at no cost while some contend that private one would bestow superior services. My essay is going to provide insights into these points of view and state my own perspective.
To begin with, the idea that inhabitants’ costs of medical examination and treatment should be covered by governmental budget is totally justified. Individuals pay a relatively huge amount of tax throughout their life, spending part of that on taking care of their physical condition would somehow enhance their patriotism and belief in their nation’s regime. Furthermore, as every single person is the cell of society, a bunch of healthy cells build the strong body which means the nations with vigorous labor force would be likely to develop economically and socially. When people are no longer preoccupied with financial worries triggered by health-related issues, it would have far-reaching effects since they prioritize creating much more value for their community.
Turning to the concept of considering denationalized hospitals best quality, it is understandable that such services are exclusively reserved for high-profile target clients who are willing to spend additional expense to escape from endless queues, crowds and enjoy exceptionally personalized care. Obviously, the advanced medical treatments are always supposed to be accompanied with the whole-hearted services and elite quality which are indispensable merits to meet customers’ expectations. Additionally, health care service industry is dog eat dog world where give no mercy to those clinics fail in solidifying excellence and competence, resulting in their prominent medical care provision.
All things considered, I believe health care system is of paramount importance to one and all and these two systems mentioned in this essay would run parallel with each other for the sake of affording the multitude a decent welfare.
- Many people say that health services should be provided by the government and should be freely available Others argue that only privatised health care can provide good quality health services Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- Many people say that health services should be provided by the government and should be freely available Others argue that only privatised health care can provide good quality health services Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- Many people say that health services should be provided by the government and should be freely available Others argue that only privatised health care can provide good quality health services Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'hospitals the best'.
Suggestion: hospitals the best
...e concept of considering denationalized hospitals best quality, it is understandable that such...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61488673139 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07377611773 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686084142395 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.3235978022 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.727272727 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0909090909 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190617338755 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641745389542 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318449076219 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101658939285 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307217834666 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.49 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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