Many people says that globalization and growing number of multi national companies have an negative effect on the environment.
What extent do you agree and disagree ?
Globalisation is the key to the future. People argue that globalisation and increasing number of worldwide enterprises have an adverse effect on the environment. In my opinion, multinational companies for exporting more natural sources. This essay will completely agree that the companies have a negative effect on the environment.
On the one hand, people argue that the multinational company has unfavourable effects on the environment by exploiting the limited natural resources. The waste from the factories or industries leads to numerous effects like air pollution, land pollution, etc. To cite an example, in 1984 a chemical company in Bhopal burned their unused sulphur, and it creates a serious effect in breathing for people. Furthermore, in the name of development many reservoirs and conservatives are getting extinct. In addition, it also alter eco system. If it continues, then the flora and fauna of the country of our country will completely lose.
On the other hand, the government has taken lots of steps to save the environment. They introduced the waste manage system to all the factories and industries. The basement system helps to decrease the level of poisonous chemicals. To cite an example, in Chennai petroleum corporation limited has recently improvised the waste management system. It helped to decrease the PH level of the water bodies near it. Moreover, the government also framed certain steps like introducing ISO in the industries.
To conclude, globalisation and multinational companies are exploiting most of the natural resources for the benefit of a few individuals. This essay I completely agree that industrialisation has brought a serious effect to our mother nature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 520, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'alters'?
Suggestion: alters
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46616541353 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21094889015 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537593984962 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8302801291 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7777777778 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7777777778 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18149011174 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500854460359 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675963103361 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113608470517 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807777703089 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.85 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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