Many people think that to become successful specialist it is better to choose a career early in life and never change it later. To what extent do you disagree with this view?
For becoming prospering authority in career life is said to choose a specific subject and follow it for the rest of the life. I personally, partially disagree with this notion. In this essay I will put forth some reasons to support my view before arriving at conclusion.
First and foremost is that the tendency of people can be changed during years. Although people have tried generally to follow their old dreams which they have had from childhood, after achieving it, they find it not interesting. Thereby they want to change their jobs.for instance there are many skillful doctors who alter their jobs and become distinguished singers.
Furthermore, despite the fact that life is too shorter than people can focus on different works,in various circumstances, Golden opportunities can be provided via changing jobs. When people do not insist on altering situation, they welcome to various chances. Numerous fortune can be brought by these chances. Therefore, some time changing occupation based on awareness and horizontal view can be the best way for improving life’s quality.
Moreover, seldom can not people find their interest correctly and need to change their job. If people choose career without being enough mature, they will confront many drawbacks in their life, while altering occupation is a second chance to boosting morale for those people who are not enough satisfied with their work. A good illustration for this part is a group of people who are bankrupt and start at first stages.
In conclusion, in my idea some times not only is the kind of necessity changing career, but also it can bring new circumstances for creating favorable life.
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- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults Compare with number of older people Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantage 73
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- People are using a lots of online language apps do the benefit of this outweigh the disadvantage 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14760147601 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67020004379 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623616236162 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2341757915 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6428571429 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219437100812 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801953494402 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429286128698 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126112413862 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478242924463 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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