Many people think that salary is the most important consideration when we choose a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people think that salary is the most important consideration when we choose a job. I totally agree with this idea due to the following reasons.
First of all, money is necessary for people to meet people’s basic needs such as housing, rental costs, food and grocery costs, utility bills, transportation costs, and other. To maintain our lives, we need to conern all neccesities daily. We must each type of bills should be paid on time to keep them available. Besides, traveling from place to place is also a vital demand that we must consider daily. If we go to work or love to reach somewhere around our area or other further places, it is essential to pay fares or costs it requires.
Secondly, money can support people in further education. As If we have enough money, we can increase our qualifications by taking higher courses in the fields we are interested in or study abroad to learn more about the world. It also meets our desires such as attending courses that educate us skills like cooking, flower arranging or home decorations.
Finally, money can bring people chances to travel. If we have a lot of money, we can travel to many places in the country or even to different countries. Traveling can help people relax, recharge our energy. However, too do this, we need the support from salary we take from working.
In conclusion, salary may be a key to people’s selecting job as it brings them great choices in their lives
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7233201581 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58144226101 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628458498024 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.625693124 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6666666667 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266455580074 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100376892869 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162275963055 0.0667982634062 243% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183090773377 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163642107207 0.056905535591 288% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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