Many people think that we have to focus on extinction of certain animal species while others think we should pay attention on problems of human .Discuss both view
Indubitably, earth is sole planet where life exists.But,in this present scenario, both humans and animals are facing innumerable problems die to various deeds.Therefore,a school of thought deem that masses should pay more attention towards preservation of some animal species whilst others oppose that focus on human beings issues is more imperative. According to my ideology, former notion is more feasible. This essay will highlight both views.
To inaugurate, there are persuasive arguments which are interlinked with my view point. predominant one is,fauna is indispensable part of ecological system because they play vital role for maintaining balance of earth.For instance,some birds eat certain insects in fields which put detrimental effect on growth of crops.consequently,conservation of animals is important for ecological chain.to add more, few animal species are also source of food like cows, hens etcetera, these animals provide milk, eggs, meat and many more food items which are impeccable part of healthy diet because these foods contain adequate amount of minerals, vitamins etcetera. Resultantly, for getting well balanced diet more attention should pay towards conservation of animals.
Nevertheless, some might argue that solutions of mankind problems is more essential in comparison with animals. Principle reason is, air pollution has become burning issue in current days which not only but detrimental impact on health but also responsible for depletion of ozone layer of earth.To examplify,various ailments like asthma, bronchitis, dermatitis are uplifting by each passing day. Ultimately, legislation should be implemented by state authority for controlling the frailing of purified air.what is more, illiteracy is a another root issue all over the globe, in many vicinities masses are living under economical deprived status,so that is why, poor children remains illiterate.Also in some remote areas schools are not available for public. Eventually, free of education system should be imposed in this third millennium for improving literacy rate.
Agglomerating the abovementioned view points, I would like to restate that eventhough problems of mankind are required immediate solution for root out such menaces but importance of animals cannot be denied because eradication of certain animals may cause serious threat for atmosphere and food chain.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, third, well, for instance, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2037.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83667621777 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29685017957 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667621776504 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.348381051 49.4020404114 325% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.181818182 106.682146367 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7272727273 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151144363094 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551878620123 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054888445188 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990503360844 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528556213755 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 13.0946893788 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.18 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.51 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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