Although many studies claim that acquiring knowledge from college or university brings more benefit in your life, still so many people prefer to use distance learning programms.
First of all, full time course from college or university always brings many advantages in your life. Students who are attending regular classes can get direct lecture from the teacher and at the same time they can clear their problems too. Along with the direct classes, they are getting practical knowledge as well.
Furthermore, attending regular classes could teach you team work, good presentation skills, improve your communication skills, you could make your personal relation too.
On the other hand, it is reasonable to say that studying part time or distance learning programs, it self brings so many advantages. You are not bound to go to a specific place on a specific timing.According to your convenience and comfort you can study. In addition to above, students have to pay less fees in comparison to regular college or university pragrams.
According to me, people who are getting degree from distance learning programs and people who are attending regular classes in college or university, belongs to different background and age groups. Most of the people, who are working full time, prefer to join distance learning programs. In order to finish their studies, aquare more knowledge or to upgrade their self, they have to join the course. Because of the lack of time, they are bound to join distance learning programs.
On the whole, I believe that people should always choose attending full time studies. Like that only they could focus on their program including practicals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...learning programms. First of all, full time course from college or university alway...
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Line 8, column 58, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
..., it is reasonable to say that studying part time or distance learning programs, it self ...
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Line 8, column 99, Rule ID: IT_SELF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'itself'?
Suggestion: itself
...art time or distance learning programs, it self brings so many advantages. You are not ...
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Line 8, column 199, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: According
...o a specific place on a specific timing.According to your convenience and comfort you can...
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Line 8, column 299, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun fees is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...addition to above, students have to pay less fees in comparison to regular college o...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ular college or university pragrams. According to me, people who are getting degree from dis...
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Line 10, column 235, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ps. Most of the people, who are working full time, prefer to join distance learning progr...
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Line 12, column 58, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to attend'.
Suggestion: to attend
...elieve that people should always choose attending full time studies. Like that only they ...
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Line 12, column 68, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...t people should always choose attending full time studies. Like that only they could focu...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir program including practicals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, still, well, in addition, first of all, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28148148148 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6299321683 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52962962963 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6058047872 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.857142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226708808471 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774486207664 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778894204257 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123714988269 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788409373711 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.