In today’s rapidly changing globalized world, the problem of environment pollution in economically strong country has become one of the main pressing issue, required immediate action. From last many decades countries from all over the world was focusing on the economical status of the country. However, other measures were also required. For instance, economical status could have detrimental effects on environment. In this essay will discuss, if it is possible for a country to be both economically successful and have clean environment or not.
Myriad of people have opinion, that it is almost impossible issue that any country could make balance in both fields, either a country could be economically strong or have clean environment. When we discuss about countries, who are successful and have manifold industries, are facing intractable situation regarding pollution. For example, in an industrial country there are many kind of pollution can produce like, air pollution, water pollution, ozone layer depletion, acid rain etc. Therefore, it is reasonable to expect that economical success is indirectly proportional to the cleanliness of environment.
On the other hand, numerous people have thought that at least successful countries could take necessary action in order to creat an environment clean nation. Although, it is not an easy task but still with the help of following certain rule could ameliorate the effect of pollution.
In the conclusion, I would like to say, that industries might have injurious environmental and health effects on the earth , but i have firm belief that every country could address this problem by several effective ways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 267, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
... all over the world was focusing on the economical status of the country. However, other m...
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Line 1, column 359, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...sures were also required. For instance, economical status could have detrimental effects o...
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Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...ple, in an industrial country there are many kind of pollution can produce like, air poll...
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Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'kinds'?
Suggestion: kinds
...in an industrial country there are many kind of pollution can produce like, air poll...
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Line 3, column 530, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...refore, it is reasonable to expect that economical success is indirectly proportional to t...
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Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...onmental and health effects on the earth , but i have firm belief that every count...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, still, therefore, at least, for example, for instance, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50387596899 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97330389774 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624031007752 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0893801427 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.333333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367899819125 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131372401492 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114746805208 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204945063808 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928514022462 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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