Many people visit museums when they travel to new place. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is certainly true to say that, travel is becoming more popular in recent years, and considered as an important pleasure for the large number of people. Presently, a proportion of people prefer to visit museums when they travel to a new country. Here, I would like to account for the reasons behind this happening.
Multifarious points throw light on the above mentioned statement. First and foremost, when people are visiting a new country, it is fruitful to see the museum in that country, in order to relish their general knowledge. In other words, the museums are often reflect the history of a country. As they contain several manuscripts, painting, statues and so on. What is more, the museums are considered as a precious historical and cultural aspect of every nation. Therefore, they are highly appreciated by large number of the masses. For example, the national museum of Egypt, is a valuable source of information about ancient Egyptian civilization. That is why every visitor to the Egypt probably will visit this museum. Moreover, many people are amused when they visit museums and such places. Thus, it is considered as an entertainment tool beside their historical significance.
Further emphasizing over my view, nowadays a plethora of tourists are booking their museum visit in advance. In fact, many of the travel agencies are following restrict schedule, and one of the favorite places which are scheduled are the museums. In addition to that, we cannot ignore the phenomenal role of the media in introducing and highlighting on the importance of the museums. Thence, it enhances the popularity and awareness toward the museums in a society.
To recapitulate, from aforementioned points, we should not underestimate the role of the museum in a society. Therefore, I believe that, due to their historical and cultural role, the people will continue enjoying the museums.
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the museums are often reflect the history of a country
the museums are often reflecting the history of a country
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