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Many People like to wear fashionable clothes.
Why do you think this is the case
Is this a good thing or bad thing.
In the world there are wide variety of fashionable clothes are available to wear and these fashions developed based on season, weather, country, culture, religion...etc. The world is changing and the people also changing according to that. Therefore fashion is essential thing in the current world. But people should mindful when wear fashionable cloths.
Firstly, people in the world like to highlight among the others in the society, For that they have to go with the new fashions frequently. Furthermore fashions are used to more beautiful and pleasant among the others, As Example, More famous ...
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there are wide variety of fashionable clothes are available to wear
there are wide variety of fashionable clothes available to wear
there are wide variety of fashionable clothes which are available to wear
fashion is essential thing
fashion is an essential thing
Sentence: But people should mindful when wear fashionable cloths.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to should and mindful
Sentence: Furthermore fashions are used to more beautiful and pleasant among the others, As Example, More famous starts such as film stars, singers, famous spotters and politicians are like to wear fashionable dresses to enhanced them self among the society.
Description: The word like is not usually used as an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to like
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and enhanced
Sentence: When we talk about the Oscar festival fans are waiting for see their stars fashionable dressers rather than the awards that they are getting.
Description: The token for is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to for and see
Sentence: Secondly, most of the people in the world are more care about the fashions clothes without any dependency from the sex, age, and country or society level.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to fashions and clothes
Sentence: Finally, my argument is fashions are good and wanted thing when deal with the complex world since this world is more competitive.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to is and fashions
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
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Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 363 350
No. of Characters: 1790 1500
No. of Different Words: 174 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.365 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.931 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.422 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 131 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 97 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 58 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.424 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.722 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.346 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.544 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.125 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5