It is human nature to want something better than they have. With increasing modernization, cloth fashion has been very famous in this century. Wearing newly designed and unique clothes in parties, ceremonies, social functions are already trendy since ancient times. Many people are addicted to wearing fashionable clothes either on occasion or just normally. But few people are happy with their simple and normal outfits.
People who love the fashion world will hardly see faults in it. Then, fashion was mostly famous among females but nowadays, many males are interested as nearly equal as women. Some people feel active and cheerful staying stylish. In my view, the increasing trend of fashioning is highly affected by things like advertisement and product markets. Fashion shows and advertisements in different social platforms highly push people to feel wanted towards dress they might not even want. Actors and celebrities doing the advertisement for different famous brands like Adidas, Puma, Gucci, and Zara create trends in social platforms. Another reason might be the easy access online markets, like online shopping sites like Amazon and Alibaba, and easy online payment with cards. People do not even need to go to market within walking distance, their order is in front of their doors within a few minutes or hours. Mostly these reasons are collecting huge participants in the fashion world in my view.
Fashion seems amazing until we know its dark side in today's world. Nowadays, fashionable and brandy clothes are mostly shown as people's status. 'Rich people are more brandy', this is what in mind of many people. In order to show their clothes, they might become addicted and might spend huge money uncaring about their basic needs. Actors, models, celebrities are highly targeted by social media about their dressing senses. This way, the pressure is created among so many people who just want to live simply.
Everything is perfect until we use the thing correctly. So we should give priority to fashion to the limit. We should be aware of how to spend money perfectly on what is required. Getting flown by advertisement is a personal work one can control. Anyone who raises personal questions on others dressing and wants to disgrace should be punished. A bad can we good by proper use, hence we should outweigh the dark side of fashioning by its mannerable use.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11311053985 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45002926253 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583547557841 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0065285449 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.5 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9615384615 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.38461538462 7.06120827912 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259931136296 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660326360054 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597929530975 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14872306787 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492172277246 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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