Many people work from home using modern technology today. Some people think that only the workers benefits from this and not employers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the context that remote working method has become more popular resting on technology betterment, it has been argued by some that only employees can reap advantages from this trend and not business owners. From my point of view, I cannot entirely agree with this assertion as online working is beneficial to both personnel and their owners.
To commence with, it is undeniable that telecommuting brings about some great interest for workers both mentally and financially. Firstly, it facilitates flexible time and personalized space which motivates people’s working spirit. To illustrate, people having jobs that demand creativity such as graphic designing, cannot create high-quality and innovative products if they work under strict supervision and a boring working space. Secondly, remote working would help reduce costs and even stress from long commutes in daily life. Without the need to commute to a physical office, employees not only save money on transportation costs but also get away from traffic congestion during rush hours which easily makes people feel tired. In addition, this transport time can be spent on their hobbies which improves work-life balance.
With respect to corporations, I believe that they also certainly gain various advantages when letting employees work remotely. First and foremost, costs associated with maintaining physical office spaces, utilities, and other overhead expenses would be reduced remarkably if working from home is implemented. Then, businesses can reinvest these savings into more profitable areas, such as employee training, higher salaries, or scale expansion. Secondly, talent pools expand when companies allow telecommuting. Indeed, recruiters are no longer limited to hiring local talent, meaning they have a greater chance of finding someone with the exact skills, experience, and personality to fit best within their organization regardless of applicants’ regions or countries.
In conclusion, state-of-the-art technology nowadays facilitates efficient tele-working and it is rational to state that it is beneficial to employees. However, I still opine that not only workers but entrepreneurs also receive advantages from this trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, in addition, in conclusion, such as, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90654205607 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12287543874 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676012461059 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.413357538 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.4 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230912297673 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734233681977 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522275251804 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145514981257 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582127658708 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.0 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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