In many places the role of mother and father are changing .It is positive and negative
development?
It is true that parents play a vital role in toddler life through in few days mother is well education in our life.I thing that it is very positive changing in any nations.The root can that woman can help their family than they would good their professional.There is strong opinion mother and father are equal whole the work.There are manifold reasons behind for this.This essay would throw some light an all aspects to see things in the right perspective.
The seeds to the issue and multiheads.There most predominant,Gone on the day nowadays mother has doing same work than father doing it.Some older consider that,it is very superb influences on the society.Therefore,female might Co-education in their life as well as they can stand on their feet.Thus,they never need to someone depended to him/her.After that,mother must do equal support their partner in any work.For instances,girls should help economic and physical,mental and mother have very strong will power all in all woman can easily observed any problem relate to home/society.
Nevertheless,there are no denying that fact the,in my point of view, today
father has a lot of supporting for partner.Otherwise,it is very common thing father and mother do the job in their life as far as they can easily handle kids because parents have good understand for their pupils.Moreover,mother and father nowadays equal obligation all the duty in the home.For example,education is very important role play in human being life than mother and father do easily teach their children.Last but not the least,nowadays mother have equal participation any field like doctor,
teacher,fashion design,engineer,industry line
and extra but also father and kids have supporting their mother.I think it is very positive effect in any countries While parents have every time and everywhere they always supporting their juvenile.
All said and done,I reckon on one hand some adolescent ponder that mother and father have backbone in their children life.Then,partner have strong bond.On other hand,they can easily understand all fell relate to family.Thus,they always support their
kids.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i reckon, i think, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46827794562 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.64412323837 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537764350453 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 82.0 20.2975951904 404% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 207.14291564 49.4020404114 419% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 452.5 106.682146367 424% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 82.75 20.7667163134 398% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 36.75 7.06120827912 520% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 47.0 5.01903807615 936% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160412609584 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105848201556 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043119261909 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743264718461 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573167933216 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.7 13.0946893788 349% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -20.21 50.2224549098 -40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.5 11.3001002004 323% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.63 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.19 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.8 10.1190380762 344% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.