School children are becoming far too dependent on computers. This is having an alarming effect on reading and writing skills. Teachers need to avoid using computers in the classroom at all costs and go back to teaching basic study skills.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
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there are manifold reasons for this.This essay throw some light an all aspects to see in the right perspective.
The seeds to the issue are mutliheads. there most predominant nowadays children are full dependent on social website . they have umpteen time spend on Internet. they class="can">can using plethora electronic materials.For instance, computer,laptop,tablets
and cell phone extra.kids do not force study .Therefore, Actually they do play many indoor games .they have never involved in any activities class="like">like study ,function ,
indoor games so on.
Nevertheless, class="it">it class="is">is no doubt technology class="is">is very essential part of life.Otherwise,technology class="is">is very fast as well as class="it">it class="is">is very common in India. However, adoloscents using the technology in their work . Todays all dozen using class="it">it.For examples, Business man , engineer , universities ,company and factors so on.Last but not the least,some people ponder class="that">that toddlers class="should">should focus on the study as far as they class="would">would reading ,writing ,
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All said and done I reckon on one hand my point of view all class="school">school class="should">should provide class="basic">basic study allow in the class .Thus,teacher could avoid smart class.on the class="other">other hand,teacher class="should">should loud read all the class="student">student read the book line voice.I think class="that">that,juveniles class="can">can easily involve in the class .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, i think, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2421.0 1615.20841683 150% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 8.61565836299 5.12529762239 168% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.85773950257 2.80592935109 316% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672597864769 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.3 1.60771543086 143% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 230.634017439 49.4020404114 467% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 242.1 106.682146367 227% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 28.1 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1 7.06120827912 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 59.0 5.01903807615 1176% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0473293445109 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384757582806 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0232908136388 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0456698377597 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231564962286 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.2 13.0946893788 254% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -16.16 50.2224549098 -32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.5 11.3001002004 199% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 33.01 12.4159519038 266% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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