Many schools these days have problems with poor students behavior. Why do you think these problems occurs? What could be done to tackle these problem?
Students behavior have been increasingly becoming more and more negative recently in schools, which is caused by several reasons. Thus, societies should take steps to mitigate this potential problem.
In my opinion, the main cause of this problem might be that students are given the wrong education and neglected from their parents, resulting in the poor behavior at school. Particularly, adults might merely focus on their working and making living more than their children’s awareness in the modern society. They spend most time on earning money to meet the need of lives, therefore, they might not have enough time to concentrate on children’s education which play an imperative role to shape teenagers’ personalities. Hence, students attitude might be effected detrimentally since they might not receive the proper teaching in formative years, which make them not differentiate whether their action is wrong or suitable.
There are several actions which people can take to tackle this problem. The first solution is that adult should spend more time on learning and investigating the appropriate measures to form their teenagers’characters beneficially in the very young age. Because the variety of decent personalities is one of the foremost parts which constructs someone’s prosperity apart from knowledge and asset. Another solution is that parents have to control and adjust their actions to avoid the harmful impact on children’s cognition since teenagers have tendency to imitate people who surrounding them daily because of the lack of experience. For example, if a child was born and brought up in the family which is violent and toxic, he might have wrong mind resulting from horrible characteristics.
In conclusion, I personally argue that the lack of teaching from family might be the main culprit of this issue and there are several ways which should be applied to eliminate its hideous influences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43853820598 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99620993616 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.8109240223 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.416666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11472729217 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501077496381 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537396472856 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748528024412 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292355368899 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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