At this moment in time, in order to unwind, youths tend to be with their classmates and they regard big malls such as cinema, cafe, etc as an fascinating places to attend and take a considerable amount of time at there. However, the elderly had an opposite perception in which for having a pleasurable interaction, they are enthusiastic about being at another places. From my point of view, I lean towards youth’s approach and it would have some beneficial effects.
First and foremost, youngsters are subjected to various kinds of severe circumstances for instance doubt about their destiny later on or being unemployed. These harsh situations lead them to elude from being unsatisfying occasions. in addition, in spare time, hanging out with close friends would have a good impact on them. Moreover, a principal blend fo buying and having a friendly interaction doesn’t have any worse repercussions on teenagers. Infusing as well as stimulating their brain are the culmination of maintaining this idea.
On the other hand, elderly claim that in order to tackle the problem, it is so conspicuous that spending time in a big shopping mall is the most trivial deed. Full consensus has been available among this group that they used to see relatives or ex co-workers in their accommodations or indoor places. also, they believed that these locations had the most calming atmosphere. As far as i’m concerned, these places prone vast majority of people to depression and feel lonely.
overall, it is so evident that government should contribute with scholars and provides some scenic facilities to soothe youth’s nerves and put a compulsory education for middle age people to increase their willingness to spend time out of the house and prevent some terrible consequences to looming.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... big malls such as cinema, cafe, etc as an fascinating places to attend and take a...
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Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'place'?
Suggestion: place
... as cinema, cafe, etc as an fascinating places to attend and take a considerable amoun...
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Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...lude from being unsatisfying occasions. in addition, in spare time, hanging out wi...
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Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
... their accommodations or indoor places. also, they believed that these locations had...
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Line 5, column 386, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I’m'?
Suggestion: I’m
... the most calming atmosphere. As far as i’m concerned, these places prone vast majo...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...eople to depression and feel lonely. overall, it is so evident that government shoul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17869415808 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89121296928 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639175257732 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7619978522 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.923076923 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161210113464 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498653167461 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376995229529 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932513549872 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228388990216 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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