Nowadays, a host of teenagers are expecting to get a gap year before working or joining to a university. They viewed it as a opportunity to see a wider of world and I also agree with them.
On the one hand, teens will gain a variety of knowledge by travelling. In fact, thanks to vacation in countryside, they experience farming life. They can learn how to crop, take care plants or animals. Moreover, they will make their skills better. For example, thanks to social activities such as Green summer, Exam season relay, etc., they improve communicate skill, team work skill and planning skill. Besides, students’ family of love is attached. For instance, children can come back their hometown where they will live with their grandparents during their vacation. Owing to that, they have beautiful memories with their family.
On the other hand, taking a year for the holiday is wasting our precious time. For example, visiting to many places within a year can be expensive and it will be and it will be a burden for your family to pay for your expenditure. Then you will lack motivation about your future while you are only focusing on travelling. Next, you will face difficulties to memorize your previous study after taking a long trip. Overall, I strongly agree that youths should have a holiday before learning at a college or starting their work. However, a year off is too long to forget their knowledge.
In conclution, whilst it is true that some young may waste their time and money doing nothing, many people will make the most of their time and gain valuable experience and money that they can miss when going straight to work or study.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ning to a university. They viewed it as a opportunity to see a wider of world and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77622377622 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51906515909 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601398601399 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9984171124 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3529411765 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184423654955 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579951553148 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549631111126 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119438276488 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481619774136 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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