Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this Development bring more advantages or disadvantages.
Nobody doubts that we live in a rapidly changing time. The technology become more advanced, So that a lot of household activities now performed by devices, which basically done with hands in past. This new trends have Advantages like saving time and money, however there are some disadvantages also we will discuss in this essay.
On the one side, the positive impact on people to using, advance electronic instruments are following. Firstly, people can do many activities on same time. For example, before an invention of technology like washing machine, many people stick with one work only, as well as spending more time on it, but after the people adopting to work with advanced instrument then, they can save more time and use that time to do more important task. Furthermore, these machines consuming less power because of this people can save time too.
On the other hand, there are negative effects also of new technology. One drawback is related to health problem. To illustrate this, people are become more inactive, if they opt machine work a lot and not doing by hands, this can lead them to obesity issue. Another downside is unemployment risen. All the people are more rely on machine, low paying jobs are vanished. For instance, today no one give money to a maid for doing house works and so this brings difficulty to finding jobs which offers low wage because of modern technology.
In conclusion, in my views; Accessing the new technology of machine aid the people to saves their time also money is more advantages compared to any of minor disadvantages like unhealthy body and unemployment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...achines consuming less power because of this people can save time too. On the oth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95588235294 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61606652548 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584558823529 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9331904694 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2857142857 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137725800893 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446498491759 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405133765625 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867821537529 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372060197126 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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