With the development of technology, now people's life are more comfortable as compared to the past decades. Machines are used to accomplish the household chores rather than done by hands. In this essay, I will shed light upon both boon and bane of machines as well my opinion in the forthcoming paragraph.
Home appliances are gaining popularity because of providing pros to us. To begin with, human efforts are required to accomplish the work at home which is more time-consuming. In today's era, each and every thing is done by machines at home. It saves time and finished the work quickly. For instance, individuals prefer dishwasher, washing machines and vacuum cleaner etcetera to save a great deal of time. Moreover, a home maker can get the opportunity to explore their skills in different fields to become a teacher, nurse or female manager because of these electric devices. Furthermore, white goods are retaining the income incurred on especially hiring a women.
On the other hand, every coin has two sides. If the domestic appliances are beneficial than the negative side can not be neglected. Firstly, the dependency on electric apparatus are increased health and skin problems such as obesity, heart and muscular pains. For example, Delhi university reveals a report that more than 60% of females who use machines for housing task gain extra weights as contrast to those who complete work by hands. Secondly, a food cooked by machines makes the food bland and bitter. Thirdly, the individuals never know the value of hardwork when they are using appliances because they know there are other ways are available to handle it. In addition, the cooking skills are vanished when they are rely upon electric things and forget it.
In my opinion, machines are valuable in certain cases. Machines have more disadvantages outweigh its advantages. So, human efforts are required to learn something new as well reduce the health issues properly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... income incurred on especially hiring a women. On the other hand, every coin has t...
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...e other hand, every coin has two sides. If the domestic appliances are beneficial ...
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...ency on electric apparatus are increased health and skin problems such as obesity...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relied'.
Suggestion: relied
...oking skills are vanished when they are rely upon electric things and forget it. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67873570925 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3472293654 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165554810173 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043395687779 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047032741235 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900996493242 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368012693874 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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