Over the past years, advancement in technology has made the human's life more easier and more comfortable. However it has made detrimental effect on individuals because they tend to eat unhealthy food and not doing enough exercises. In this essay, I will discuss reasons and some suggestions to tackle with this hurdle in the subsequent paragraph.
There are various reasons which are responsible for adopting an unhealthy lifestyle by human beings. To begin with, both male and female are selecting their own profession. More working pressure is liable for buying readymade food than to prepare at home. Consequently, the more consumption of fast food increases the various problems such as obesity, diabetes, stroke as well as heart attack etcetera.
Moreover, with the escalating usage of techno appliances, individuals become more lazy and easily adopt sedentary lifestyle. It reduces not only face to face communication but also raising the depression and weak eyesight obstacles. In addition, the physical efforts are reduced by the popularity of washing machine, microwave and other home appliances. Furthermore, advertisement are playing an important role in promoting the junk food by multinational companies.
On the other hand, there are some suggestions which are more beneficial for adopting a healthy lifestyle. Firstly, fixed working hours by the government is more profitable for the safety of employees. For example, As per the factories act 1948, every adult can not work for more than 48 hours in a week and not more than 9 hours in a day especially in india. Secondly, to aware the individuals about the negative consequences of junk food and also encourage to eat more nutritious home-made food. Thirdly, government put more restrictions on the selling of fast food. To initiate the youngsters to join zym or fitness centre which is mainly open by government and other business organizations.
To sum up, it is rightly said that health is wealth. If the individuals are more conscious about their health issues than they prefer only homemade food and also provide more time to do sporting activities, thus they can maintain life balance and stay more healthy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
... advancement in technology has made the humans life more easier and more comfortable. ...
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Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... in technology has made the humans life more easier and more comfortable. However it has ma...
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Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... life more easier and more comfortable. However it has made detrimental effect on indiv...
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Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... To begin with, both male and female are selecting their own profession. More wor...
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Line 7, column 459, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'eating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: eating
...quences of junk food and also encourage to eat more nutritious home-made food. Thirdly...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28653295129 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9205003714 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587392550143 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6141373452 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1052631579 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3684210526 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4210526316 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.085723629781 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0283587475113 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398719003002 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0556290716862 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297336408835 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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