There are two trends for university students living with are staying in the parents' home while others settle far from homes because of studying in the far university. In my opinion, there are some advantages and drawbacks of these trends. I am going to delve into both the positive and negative aspects of my essay.
On the one hand, there are both advantages and disadvantages for university students living with there families. The most glaring advantage that living in their families helps students save a lot of accommodation fees which occupy large money of total budget per month for each student. Another benefit that these students will enjoy the adequate supports from their families like meals, healing costs, etc. Moreover, parents may help students control their lifestyle, help them balance the time for studying and relaxation. In spite of these advantages, there is a drawback that in some families, parents are sometimes strict because of the gap generation, they will push more pressure on the student if the results of their study are fair.
On the other hand, students who live far from their home also get a lot of benefits and drawbacks as well. There are some viable benefits to living and studying in an unfamiliar city. Firstly, students have to manage everything by themself, it makes students gradually become self-made. Secondly, these students easier to make study routines and to interact with others, therefore they can improve their communication skills. Despite the benefits mentioned above, students live away from home may face challenges, the big challenges is that students are difficult to control themself because there are a lot of attractions may harm their study, for example, many kinds of virtual games make some students become addicted gamer then they have to postpone their study. Another drawback is the high living cost that students have to suffer from, especially, in some big cities, because the accommodations fee are extremely high then many students have to find a part-time job to earn money to pay for them.
In conclusion, each trend has own advantages and disadvantages, for each particular family will choose a better trend that suitable for personal circumstances
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17451523546 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65287201219 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531855955679 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.0708847446 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.533333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0666666667 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389634179758 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137146154353 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981538350669 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219468034872 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104858515915 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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