Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations?
Studying university is really necessary in our life, it helps many students have more oppotunities for find good job. But during the period college students leaning here, there are have too much problem that they must be live far from home if the school is in diffirent place and they are able to do some part-time job, it's a massive disavantage for them compared with others live with family because their school near home.
In terms to the people who living farther away from their relatives, it can be great difficulty for them. Firstly, it's clearly to see that the young people ever have been live far away from home before so they will face many problems that cause difficultly in life. Make them becoming weaker and shier in the past, it forced students must pass all of this matter. Furthermore, when they can face to face all trouble, they are able to learn more things in life which helps them better and expand more their knowledge. however, because of live away from home so they can be feel lonely, stress and down feeling after the hard day without words of comfort from a loved one, then no one can cheer they up that affect learning outcomes.
On the other hand, university students live with relatives have more advantages as others do not. they have more delicious meals or direct attention from their family, all of cost of living can be efforless achieve. Morever, they don't need to find out the part-time job, it's amazing with them however, they can't learn more things from life if they always live with their parents, they can't expand their knowledge anymore or they won't have more experience compared with people who live without relatives. it's really detrimental to them.
As the result, all of things in the world have double two-face knife that people should think carefully before decided do somethings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
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Line 1, column 321, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...they are able to do some part-time job, its a massive disavantage for them compared...
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Line 2, column 116, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... be great difficulty for them. Firstly, its clearly to see that the young people ev...
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Line 2, column 518, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...better and expand more their knowledge. however, because of live away from home so they...
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Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... have more advantages as others do not. they have more delicious meals or direct att...
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Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...can be efforless achieve. Morever, they dont need to find out the part-time job, its...
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Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ob, its amazing with them however, they cant learn more things from life if they alw...
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Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ey always live with their parents, they cant expand their knowledge anymore or they ...
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Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Its
...with people who live without relatives. its really detrimental to them. As the re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, really, so, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7641509434 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2165528825 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537735849057 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.2108854588 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.25 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293226388885 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118236066623 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091033929781 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178315222947 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110351110266 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.