In many western countries there is an increasing number of couples choosing to have no children.
What are the advantages and disadvantages to couples having no children?
It is thought by some that in an increasing number of western countries more and more people choose child-free life. While people without children have independent life, they might suffer from loneliness.
Firstly, on benefit of people having child-free life is that they can do what they want and live where they want. These is because they do not need to live in one place for a long time and they easily can change work place. Secondly, people without children can attend universities and improve their skills in any age as they do not need to save money and energy for their children. Thirdly, it is easier to do charity work and give monetary aid to needy people. For example, one famous businessperson Alisher Usmanov established the biggest charity organization in our country that helps to safe national heritage and provide free medicine in distant regions of our country.
On the other hand, one problem when people do not have children is that they might suffer when they become older. When people getting older they want to have restful life, for example, spending their time with grandchildren and take care about their houses, but they do not have it. As a result, old people feel loneliness, further, they become weak and face health problems issues. As they do not have children, they have to live in retire houses or in hospitals as only there they can get attention and care.
In conclusion, although child-free people live for own pleasure, they face many problems when they become older.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 114, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[4]
Message: Did you mean 'this'?
Suggestion: This
...hat they want and live where they want. These is because they do not need to live in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88715953307 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43488999883 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552529182879 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9825382034 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.666666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143191710629 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677782581542 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577384263623 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107266451111 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725697356396 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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