Many young children have unsupervised access to the Internet and are using the Internet to communicate wit others. This has can lead to a number of dangerous situations which can be threatening for children.
What problems do children face when going online without parental supervision?
How can these problems be solved?
Modern days, the Internet becomes one of the main entertainments in every society where people can communicate, make a friend and find variety interesting videos. However, there are several weak points which are connect with social networks when parents cannot control their children's chats with same strangers.
First of all, children are not objective in a making decisions. Teenagers cannot clearly understand when person on the other end of the net lays or says true and youth easily gives same personal information on them self or their parents. For instance, cheaters can rid children's believe by saying something untrue but interesting and teens started believe him or her after that no daub it is easy take personal date from them.
Secondly, on the Internet is many kidnappers and pedophiles. Everyone can create own fake profile on website as a young boy or girl and invite children to go out. In a result that meeting might be finish with some criminal.
That is why, parents must check their children's internet conversations with others. For that purpose, mother or father should explain to children the problems that wait them on the Internet. Also, children should tell to their parents who they are virtual friends and about what they texting.
In conclusion, as it is shown, the Internet have troubles for children, if their parents did not check children's online conversations. However, these problems are fixable if parents pay attention to their children online live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 214, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'connected'.
Suggestion: connected
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16115702479 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61356041441 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648760330579 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1817706497 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0769230769 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338069854873 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122378261174 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678648135501 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186186587581 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058144037334 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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