Many young people get married before finishing their study and establishing a good job. To what extant do you agree? Please explain.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is trying to getting married before completing studies and gaining a proper employment. There is a widespread worry that many youngsters waist their invaluable young life by getting married and collecting a lot of responsibilities into their lives. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious consideration.
There are numerous arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that by getting married earlier instead of having a good occupation and education, people will busy with numerous responsibilities because they have another party to look after and fulfill their needs as a husband and wife. Not only, does this postpone their targets and achievements, but it can deteriorate them in physically and mentally. Needless to say, these drawbacks on someone's future are far-reaching indeed.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is people can improve and gain a lot of invaluable things to someone's life. If they can share responsibilities and other tasks with each other inevitably early married will not be harmful to anyone because it is easy to handle study and married life with a great contribution to each other.
In view of the argument outlined above, one can conclude that despite some benefits, the drawbacks of early marriages are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youngsters'' or 'youngster's'?
Suggestion: youngsters'; youngster's
.... There is a widespread worry that many youngsters waist their invaluable young life by ge...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...th a great contribution to each other. In view of the argument outlined above, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26940639269 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01511658907 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598173515982 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1835281138 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.4 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167710370307 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571025310924 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650282385565 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931874404246 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752564440712 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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