In this contemporary era there are less opportunity founded in developing countries generally youngsters prefer to work and live in adroad before coming to suitable conclusion this essay intends to discuss both side views.
To begin with the people who supports brain drain system cite a host of benefits firstly, there will be a good chance for any individual to be dependent on their own . Teenagers are normally rely on their parents and friends as they spend huge time with them for small things like managing expenses , making food they take help from people whom they know very well and by living in another nation will make them to do all things by there own . For instance, it has been observed in survey conducted by university of California that reason behind international pass out students not asking help was there habit which they developed when they were living far away from their loved ones.
Furthermore, by living and working in other nation people can earn more money which makes them to feel less financial burden and this helps them to rise their family well. To exemplify , according to research of times Delhi it was outcome that reason behind every graduated pharmacist aiming to job and settle in Canada was high payment which helps them to pay their education loan which not only eliminates the financial burden but also makes savings.
However, there are some inevitable disadvantages to begin with , communication problem which many of beginners face because of lack of knowledge of native language and this makes a difficult to socialize with local people and many of employees find difficulty in settling in new nation. For example, the according to survey of ingots company the most difficulty period for new employees was to make friends there is always a language barrier which comes between them and as a result they may feel loneliness .
To conclude, although there are some cons which definitely has to be face during at initial stage , there are lots advantages comes such as more money and independent life so I believe that by living and working outside is a positive development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92112676056 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48824413138 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580281690141 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 355.0 20.2975951904 1749% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1747.0 106.682146367 1638% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 355.0 20.7667163134 1709% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 137.0 7.06120827912 1940% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157560606696 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157560606696 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937555701833 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446406337297 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 179.2 13.0946893788 1368% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -288.85 50.2224549098 -575% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 141.7 11.3001002004 1254% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.74 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 25.07 8.58950901804 292% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 144.0 10.1190380762 1423% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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