Nowadays, with the development of technology, mass media has gained popularity in our daily life. While there are some argument denying the influence of mass communications on people's thoughts, I personally believe that they have certain impacts on shaping our ways of thinking.
On the one hand, it is certainly true that the media is the only source of information we have. That news is transmitted via televisions, newspaper, radio,... or by other means of communications leads to the fact that we have no choice other than approaching the information from this source. Therefore, we have a tendancy to believe whatever it says on mass media. A phenomenon which emerged a few years ago in China sets a good example of this. The Chinese mothers used desiccated milk instead of breast milk for their child just because of believing in the advertisement on television.
On the other hand, with the development of technology, Internet has become an indispensable part in everyday activities. The wide coverage of it has made people more dependent on it for many purposes. For example, we tend to do a research online before making any decision. As a result, it make a deep impact on our mind.
In conclusion, as the mass media covers mostly every aspect of our life, it is undeniable that it greatly influences our ideas
- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?
- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?
- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?
- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?
- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 154, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...mitted via televisions, newspaper, radio,... or by other means of communications l...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...re making any decision. As a result, it make a deep impact on our mind. In conclusi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1100.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93273542601 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97298933186 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627802690583 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.098976366 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6153846154 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198063671026 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625175325058 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370056505607 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114589536187 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262513373379 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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