Mathematics plays a pivotal role in business goals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The has been a colossal upsurge in prodigies discussing the topic of the role of mathematics in reaching the business goal. It is hardly unaccepted that the mathematical field is of fundamental importance in our daily life and a determining factor to bring success to the business. In spite of the essential functions of maths, I personally believe that there are other factors that contribute to the target of the company except for maths and will scrutinize these in the following paragraph.
First and foremost, ethics plays a pivotal role in a business’s goal. Without the ethical facet, an organization is prone to the verge of bankruptcy. Secondly, each member in one company needs to have a team spirit in order to willing to support and coordinate each order. If an individual in the group is selfish and egoistic, it hard to find a common idea in order to run the system efficiently and effectively and reach the hall of fame. Thirdly, the managers or chief execution operators are obliged to know the internal factors such as the feelings, motivation, etc, and external factors such as the working environment to satisfy the employee, which can promote the productivity of the company. For instance, there is substantial evidence in an economy that management skills can help an organization operate in a productive state and earn a profit.
Moreover, fulfilling the knowledge gap in terms of customer psychology and trend not only accelerate the speed of the operating process but also provide a better service for the clients. Obviously, amassing the idea related to literature, and languages can support us in spurring the development of a company. A person who is skilled in literacy, and languages can create more interesting content and ease the difficulty of attracting domestic and foreign investors, and customers. However, mathematics still owns a vital responsibility in a business’s operation. Without mathematical formulas and applications, we hardly create a statistical list and calculate the asset, and debt of a company. Needless to say, an employee who is gifted at maths can support the company to enumerate the monthly input and outcomes. To cite an example, a range of banks and prominent companies hire a worker who is talented in the mathematical field because if there are a few mistakes in the system can put the company in danger even in prison.
In conclusion, mathematics is one of the most important elements in running a system. Nevertheless, this subject is useless in gaining a goal for a business without the mentioned factors. In my opinion, we should apply a variety of factors related to management combined with mathematical skills in order to assist the organization reaches its targets as much as possible.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, except for, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2312.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 453.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10375275938 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06069664988 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540838852097 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 755.1 506.74238477 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.256075555 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.684210526 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8421052632 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26315789474 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131976938335 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512384594611 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882389472179 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861693346923 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259622751913 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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