in may countries plastic containers have become more popular than ever They are used in many business for example food ang drinks industries Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

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in may countries,plastic containers have become more popular than ever. They are used in many business, for example, food ang drinks industries. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

there is a tendency that using convenient material tools like plastic products are more prevalent in every corner of the world. Although it has some merits, i think the drawbacks should be more consider.
on the one hand, there are significantly advantages that plastic usage bring to our lives. one of the most evident benefit is that plastic is duarable and vesaltile, thus, it is easy to use and discard. For instance, it is much convenient for consumers to fold several nylon bags and put them in trash bins after use, compared to paper or other materials. Furthermore, plastic container are highly economical for both consumers and producers since the costs for its products are relatively low.
on the other hand, i think the detrimental effects of using plastic far outnumber its convenience involved. it is undoubted that the mass consumption of plastic based products has caused long lasting environmental pollution, which is first and most serious issue. According to some scientific reseaches, plastic material fail to degrade over centuries and release destructive chemicals severely contaminating soil and water. Another noticeable damage is that the overuse of plastic does harm for holistic ecology system. For the fresh water and marine ecology, particles from plastic debris, called microplastic, have found in some creatures through food web or over exposure in their living environment. this issue may lead to push many living creatures on the verge of extinction, which the main cause from anthropogenic discarding plastic tools.
in short, while plastic containers are lucrative and convenient in some aspects, their severe rishs are much more significant. thus, it is high time that all government and individuals took more radica land proactive measures to minimize this negative usage habit.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, while, for instance, i think, in short, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36013986014 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80988601827 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618881118881 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0951991271 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201638605776 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683687291314 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255275047168 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116665681867 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264812420668 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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