The land requirement for manufacturing meat is comparatively higher than for growing crops. Some people claim that global meat use ought to be decreased due to the limited availability of land. To bring the rates of meat use down, two methods can be applied: prioritizing fish and plant food use and discouraging meat use. However, these can affect the well-being of mankind in the long run.
Promoting plant products and fish is the best method to reduce eating meat. Put simply, this can be achieved by raising public awareness about the health benefits of alternative food items and the disadvantages of meat consumption. For example, were people to know the positive effects of vitamins, minerals, and anti-oxidant, which are contained in fruits and vegetables, but they will deliberately reduce meat consumption if they know that meatatarians are 75% more likely to develop cardiovascular diseases in their fifty’s, according to the annual newsletter of the national health ministry.
However, the reduced amount of meat in meals causes chronic anemia. In other words, the bioavailability of iron in plant foods is markedly lower than meat iron, thereby the iron absorption is lower for plant foods, which leads to low levels of hemoglobin in the blood. In turn, anemia gives rise to various long-term health issues, including poor cognition and chronic heart failure. This is supported by a recent study conducted at Oxford University, in which they claimed that the Mathematical skills of 14 to 16 aged vegetarians is 50% less than meat-eaters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, for example, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96323066939 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.7366628037 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.090909091 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281108217308 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108119836196 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623313963062 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181935943631 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569401729852 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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