Mobile phones and internet can be quite useful to the older people but unfortunately this section of the society is less exposed to the said facilities. in what ways do you think internet and mobile facilities can help the elderly people? how can they be encourage to make use of such facilities?
It has been an issue of debate whether Smartphones and Internet is fecund for elderly people or it is futile for them. Although, maximum proportion of aged people are being not introduced to these amenities. this essay will highlight the most beneficial method for older people to use internet effortlessly and also how can we propel them to use such a facilities.
Evidently, aged people can use social media as an entertainment purposes such as listening hymns or watching religious discourse. Secondly, with the help of internet platform elderly people can pay their electricity bill and also can purchase goods throughout some online websites, which makes them totally an independent person. Furthermore, aged people can also utilise internet to find out locations during their tour which makes their journey more effortless.
Having mention the above points, I would further like to state that elderly people can get services throughout internet.For instance, they cannot only consult doctors but also by medicine without going to the hospital.Moreover,playing online brainstorm games can delay losing cognitive memory and it also makes their mind very sharp.
Analysing the statement further, using such a technological devices is really a challenging phase for elderly people.To overcome this fear children should guide their grandparents how to use the internet as they are the only person we used to spend most of the time with them.For example, children can teach aged people by giving them some rudimentary tips suggested uses of different applications, gathering news from the internet so on.
To recapitulate, undoubtedly technological advancement has made older people easy to communicate with others.Although, it is also a responsibility of the law enforcement agency to teach elderly people, how to utilise these technologies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55985915493 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19816599336 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605633802817 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.015150472 49.4020404114 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.444444444 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5555555556 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320519515865 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147692784884 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511825191539 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181780317619 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643539759328 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.56 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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