Mobile telephones have brought many benefits but they have also negative effects. Do the disadvantages of having mobile phones outweigh the advantages? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
It goes without saying that the presence of mobile telephones has greatly impacted our modern life on
both positive and negative sides. While I accept that they contain some inevitable drawbacks, I believe
this technological products have delivered many more incontrovertible benefits.
On the one hand, this leaders of technology breakthroughs assist individual user with their multiple
functions such as health monitor, self-entertainment, location identifier, and particularly emergency
help. In fact, parents, whose children are equipped a smart phone, feel certain more secure than other
one because they can reach their kids wherever they are at any time. From a social perspective, this
all-in- one device satisfies global communication needs. It is pretty obvious that using mobile phone is
one of the most effective ways to narrow the distance between people from all over the world. For
example, the connection to Internet from our cell phone signifies the access of social network such as
Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram… where we could immediately update the latest news from friends
and family.
On the other hand, I would argue that the disadvantages are outweighed by the advantages. The
adoption of this high-tech product truly spreads the generation gap which is the repercussion of a
constant mobile phone dependence. For instance, young people are likely games-addicted that leads
to an absence of interaction between family members. The multifunctional device is considerably a
portable friend whom children could spend hours each day instead of having conversation with their
parents. The overuse of mobile phone not only provoke lack of communication but also link to an
inactive lifestyle.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential dangers of using mobile telephones are less significant
than the possible benefits.
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- Mobile telephones have brought many benefits but they have also negative effects. Do the disadvantages of having mobile phones outweigh the advantages? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. 84
- Mobile telephones have brought many benefits but they have also negative effects Do the disadvantages of having mobile phones outweigh the advantages Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience 61
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262820512821 0.247107183377 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.112179487179 0.155533422707 72% => OK
Adjectives: 0.128205128205 0.0946595960268 135% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0416666666667 0.0501214627716 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0512820512821 0.0437548338989 117% => OK
Prepositions: 0.134615384615 0.122226691241 110% => OK
Participles: 0.025641025641 0.0403226058552 64% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.09417699294 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0160256410256 0.0326793684256 49% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.105769230769 0.0861772015684 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0128205128205 0.021408717616 60% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0160256410256 0.011925033212 134% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1906.0 1933.35771543 99% => OK
No of words: 284.0 316.048096192 90% => OK
Chars per words: 6.71126760563 6.12580529183 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.422535211268 0.374742101984 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.31338028169 0.28420135186 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.239436619718 0.203846283523 117% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.154929577465 0.137316102897 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09417699294 2.80594681477 110% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.037074148 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661971830986 0.56093040696 118% => OK
Word variations: 80.145038766 60.7387585426 132% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 21.8461538462 20.7743622355 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4695598385 49.517814964 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.615384615 127.492653851 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7743622355 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.769230769231 0.814263465372 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38877755511 433% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 15.0 3.99599198397 375% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 53.1841820152 49.1944974215 108% => OK
Elegance: 2.0625 1.69124875643 122% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295267886592 0.332605444948 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0746332953496 0.102741220458 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0519421421632 0.0668466124924 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.74186825577 0.534860350844 139% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.289407618897 0.148594505496 195% => Sentences are changing often in a paragraphs.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113017537611 0.134430193775 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580999408387 0.0742795772207 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.0689089400892 0.324371583561 21% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0772597839696 0.0638462369009 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934480201872 0.228012699653 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474833927089 0.058150111329 82% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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