Modern appliances in the home have become more common, leaving no doubt that advances in technology have improved our lifestyle.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?
Technology has made an unprecedented advancement in every field. We are surrounded with numerous appliances, which made our life easy and comfortable. I completely agree with the notion that apparently, advancing technology has a pleasing impact on our way of living.
To commence it, electronic gadgets and appliances made it possible to complete the household chores in no time, and it has also reduced human efforts. To illustrate it, in the past people used to wash clothes with there hands, which took hours and lots of physical efforts. However, nowadays every house has a washing machine which do not need human efforts, we just need to put clothes and dettergent into the machine and rest the machine will do to clean the clothes. Moreover, along with washing clothes person can do other tasks at the same time. Hence, these devices not only save the time, but also made human's life hustle free.
Along with it, another pivotal significance of these advancements are, they play a vital role in providing a great source of entertainment to people, who have no time to go out for this. For example, television can be seen at every house. In the leisure time people can watch any program of there choice, as numerous channels and programes telecasts on television. Although it is not like the screen in cinemas, people can watch any movie telecasting for free while sitting at home.
In summary, advancing technology has provided us with many instruments, gadgets, machines and what not. All these inventions are instrumental indeed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.046875 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73004120848 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0428826282 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2857142857 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167879050528 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554792269284 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533802121411 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104866715733 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389653745285 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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