Modern cultures around the world have become similar when compared to the past. What are the reasons is it a positive or negative development?
In this modern scenario, cultures plays a very significant role for a nation because it gives knowledge about their habitation Despite, latest culture around the world have almost becomes equivalent unless,it compared to traditional ones. thus,this type of advancement include negative growth because it will stop the growth of society as well as mentality of an individual.
To embark with, there are multiple reason why latest lifestyle is being similar to traditional culture. firstly, Most of the time in past culture people have little knowledge about their tradition but after the advancement in Technology or declining "literacy rate" people are get education as a result of which they realize that a modern culture is almost equivalent to traditional one the only need is to see this similarity is "education" which has not available at that time if it has but not as in vast range is the ultimate drawback of traditional time.Additionally, there are numerous of researches convicted that modern culture is almost same as same unless we compared with older ones one clear example, just imagine at the time of Indian marriages, which has done in traditional Temple with rules and regulation at the same time in modern culture. It is also fellow same way as of past temples, but the way people organize marriage event is change consequently, thing which had done in past is appropriate equivalent to modern society.
I would like to add some more points to support about negative growth which I opine. if they both are similar then there is no necessity of giving to such different names. Meanwhile,if people use both is there is culture then there is a strong possibility that do not require importance of them and also being confused in this issue in is modern is best or past culture is best because they are such there are such things which is totally distinct in both culture. In addition to this, traditional cultures People has given less importance to girl child for study purpose. But,in actual it is totally opposite in modern society eventually,this type of thoughts process will create a negative growth for society.
To conclude, this essay have discuss all the relevant idea with one such example However, It has been observed that both the modern and past culture have similar to each others But, negative growth is that the mentality of people are not refrain in past tradition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, thus, well, while, in addition, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2035.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07481296758 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86854160107 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478802992519 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 673.2 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 189.452931419 49.4020404114 383% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.0 106.682146367 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.4545454545 20.7667163134 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8181818182 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255446188199 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094104510742 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655877438148 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170114580819 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400803028814 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.0946893788 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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