In this modern age, medical science is growing rapidly with highly innovative and technological system, which is introduced in all over the country. Medical science is referred to identify the diseases and cure it by producing medicines, machinery and equipments and operation strategy with professional skill doctors. However, I strongly believe with that the medical science is playing a vital role in individual unhealthy person's life. Even though, there are some benefits and drawbacks in the medical science field.
On the one hand, the medical science sector is giving new life to survive for debilitate patients by researching medicines in order to cure for serious diseases like heart attack, cholesterol, Cancer, pneumonia, asthma and much more. Moreover, with the help from those medicines and equipments, it not only gives a prolong life expectancy, also at the same they can spend some more time with their family members. Furthermore, those unfit people can do something for their family. For instance, life insurance can be considered as a good example.
On the other hand, Although highly advance equipments has manufactured and provided in the hospital sector by medical science industry in order to give more time period to survive, nevertheless at the same time sickly and critical health condition people are also have to move their life throughout physically and mentally ache. Moreover, especially medical science plays an essential role for elderly population because elderly people require much more medical care, such as, organ transplant, dialysis and vitamins. This consequence takes place at old age, when human body cannot function properly by itself with the past of time. Therefore, medical science is said to be as a legal process to use in an ethical way.
To sum up, I personally agree with that there should be good quality machinery and equipment items as well as medicines. In an additional, at the same time there should be a good treatment in order to reduce body pain and anxiety for infirm people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 426, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...cines and equipments, it not only gives a prolong life expectancy, also at the same they ...
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Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dered as a good example. On the other hand, Although highly advance equipments...
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Line 5, column 702, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an ethical way" with adverb for "ethical"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...is said to be as a legal process to use in an ethical way. To sum up, I personally agree with ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dy pain and anxiety for infirm people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25914634146 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70800193216 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582317073171 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8147695034 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.214285714 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128936342867 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479270835285 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034385848042 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759882700501 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551214043631 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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