Modern medical science has made it possible to combat many diseases. This is one reason that people are living longer lives bow than they did in the past. Discuss the effects this might have on society.
In this modern age, advances in the medical field have made possible to eradicate many diseases, prolonging life expectancy. At the same time, these medical achievements have affected the society. Not only has the distribution of national budget changed, but also there has been an increase in the demand for medical assistance.
National budgets have been redistributed in order to attend the needs of the elderly population. Take the case of the European countries, where the elderly population exceeds the young, as result a considerable part of their budget is allocated to pensions, social secure and hospitals. Subsequently, there are fewer founds for the areas of education and investigation. Thus, the fact that medical advances have made possible to prolong life expectancy, somehow has adversely affected the economy of many countries.
Another effect is the need for elderly medical care. Currently there is a shortage of doctors and nurses across the globe since the elderly population has grown up. Moreover, elderly population requires much more medical care, such as, organ transplant, dialysis, vitamins and the like, since the human body can not function properly by itself with the past of time. Therefore, people rely more than ever in medical treatments and indeed a better public health system.
All thins considered, it could be stated that state-of-art technology applied in the medicine field has made possible to prolong life-expectancy, which has lead to changes in society. Some of the effects have been the generation of economic expenses, affecting the national budget, as well as the increase in the demand for medical services. It seems that if proper measures are not taken the society could be adversely affected in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35125448029 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81490507834 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584229390681 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8971432291 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.642857143 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185182796044 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644800731795 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714743631286 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116395570776 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634794783749 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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