Modern society nowadays suffer from juvenile crime. This rate is becoming increase.
With the development of socio-economic development, the rate of young people committing crime is on the rise and it has become the most concerned issue of both developing as well as developed countries. In this essay, the two main reasons and some appropriate solutions will be indicated to deal with this social problem.
First of all, the number of juvenile crimes has increased for recent years due teenager are being addicted to violent computer games and films. It is clear that young people spend more time watching TV with varieties of violence images on films such robs and pornographies. Therefore, young adults are absolutely possible to absorb these images to imitate regardless of its legal consequences. According to this, more and more young people have become law-breakers to be prosecuted.
Another reason is that parents indulge their children by giving a large amount of money. In the life of urbanization and industrialization, parents are busy with their jobs and they do not have enough time to repair family meals for children. Therefore, parents usually choose a solution via giving their children substantial sums of money to enjoy lunch or dinner at restaurant. When young people have money, they try to enjoy beer and use drug and this may lead to excessive drinking and being addicted to drug use. As a consequence, to have money to meet their demands, young people would make plan for committing crime.
It seems to me that violent programs are making a huge part of increasing the number of wrongdoers generally and juvenile crime in modern society because young people are easy to imitate. Due to indulgence, children are given money to spend and this will also form bad behaviours for those. It is essential for governments and families have suitable solutions to cope with this scenario.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...most concerned issue of both developing as well as developed countries. In this essay, the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, therefore, well, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06644518272 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80637504369 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578073089701 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.332049295 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.928571429 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142590546851 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478765633132 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465390416539 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974743097365 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489348357597 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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