modern technology allows machines to perform the hard work instead of humans. does this have a positive or negative effect on people? give your own opinions and examples.
It is a known fact that, with the development of technology human work and life became more easy and convenient by allowing machines to do job instead of human beings. It has to be admitted that, there are many merits and demerits for this trend. However, I personally believe that, advantages of modern technologies and machineries outweigh disadvantages.
On the one hand, advancement in technology reduced the workload of human beings in almost all aspect of life and made life more convenient and comfortable. For example, before the development of cranes workers had to carry heavy stones and materials to building sites and thus the safety of workers were compromised to a major extent. More over innovations made it easy to rescue the individuals who work in mines and related places which would not have been possible otherwise.
Furthermore, innovations like computers and laptops helps to reduce errors enormously in work places,thus contributing to efficient and more profitable industries and nations as a whole. Simple human errors for instance, can make millions of dollars lost within a fraction of minute.
However, it cannot be denied that, there are some drawbacks for all technological innovations. People in modern era become more lazy compared to their counterparts in earlier ages. As a result, it contributed with many diseases such as obesity, diabetes mellitus, and many other cardio vascular diseases. More over it leads to labor crisis due to current economical recession.
In conclusion, I believe that, all technological developments have positive and negative impacts on human life. Nevertheless these advantages surge over disadvantages and the demerits can be eliminated if individuals become more responsible and proactive.
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innovations like computers and laptops helps to reduce errors
innovations like computers and laptops help to reduce errors
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 275 350
No. of Characters: 1449 1500
No. of Different Words: 166 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.072 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.269 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.974 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 110 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.643 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.229 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.315 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.592 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.013 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , thus
... reduce errors enormously in work places,thus contributing to efficient and more prof...
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Line 7, column 356, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...it leads to labor crisis due to current economical recession. In conclusion, I believe ...
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Line 9, column 113, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...ive and negative impacts on human life. Nevertheless these advantages surge over disadvantag...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'thus', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.254901960784 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.133986928105 0.155533422707 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.124183006536 0.0946595960268 131% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0522875816993 0.0501214627716 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0294117647059 0.0437548338989 67% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130718954248 0.122226691241 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0326797385621 0.0403226058552 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.07072276029 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0359477124183 0.0326793684256 110% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0588235294118 0.0861772015684 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0130718954248 0.021408717616 61% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00653594771242 0.011925033212 55% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1764.0 1933.35771543 91% => OK
No of words: 274.0 316.048096192 87% => OK
Chars per words: 6.43795620438 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.408759124088 0.374742101984 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.310218978102 0.28420135186 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.248175182482 0.203846283523 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.171532846715 0.137316102897 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07072276029 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.037074148 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605839416058 0.56093040696 108% => OK
Word variations: 65.6375957966 60.7387585426 108% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.5714285714 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6609534819 49.517814964 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 127.492653851 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.928571428571 0.814263465372 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 50.5933263816 49.1944974215 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.93939393939 1.69124875643 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25253377633 0.332605444948 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0650532251684 0.102741220458 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0598224090668 0.0668466124924 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.552708339684 0.534860350844 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.115514197422 0.148594505496 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950230250353 0.134430193775 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537144856921 0.0742795772207 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.242018709494 0.324371583561 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0977119995946 0.0638462369009 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152316740929 0.228012699653 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548229837543 0.058150111329 94% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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