"Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. To what extent is this a positive or a negative development?"

Essay topics:

"Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. To what extent is this a positive or a negative development?"

Many people think modern technology development help them download copyrighted documents such as books or music easily without costs. I strong believe that this process of technology development bring not only positive results but also have many negatively.
Firstly, thanks to the advantaged of technology, people can get information conveniently and quickly from the website for no charge. We can have many time to surf the Internet to select music or books what they enjoy and then download it to their gadget such as tablet, laptop or smartphone to use. In Viet Nam, instead in buying on books or video from the store, they usually download some documents which allowed from home network. Secondly, may website have many fans who followed programs such as music or book channels, bring profit for them.
However, the development of technology recent years, this make to copyright issues is not concerned properly. Some books or music are sharing in the Internet freely, not allow from the author and do not pay royalties. Many company loss profit because their competition stolen product and many authors are not protected from their self-product. Many books company can not buy the books in the store, because some people like loading from the Internet.
In conclude, the development of technology contributed very much for the economy, bring many positive to people who want to improve knowledge but it also make many difficult to writer and some company. I think with some books or music, the government should implement the law to protect writer and some company.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...or music easily without costs. I strong believe that this process of technology develop...
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Line 2, column 145, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
... the website for no charge. We can have many time to surf the Internet to select music or...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 156, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...o want to improve knowledge but it also make many difficult to writer and some compa...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, i think, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13618677043 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58261429407 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544747081712 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8394144248 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281328352892 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111157374133 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421644723289 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175917483379 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432604371186 0.056905535591 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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