In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food or use animal products, for instance, clothing and medicines. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Whether animal should be used in food or other industry is a serious controversy from past and now. A truth is, people have less needed to sacrifice animals’ live since many productive processes have been replace by technology. However, there are still lots of ingredients come from animal which people cannot produce in laboratory.
To begin with, I totally agree that animals are less necessary in nowadays industrial process. One is because people have found alternatives which are cheap and environmental friendly. For instance, ancient people believe rhino horn can cure cancer and make body stronger and this opinion have caused many rhinos are killed by poachers and even be pushed to the edge of extinction. Todays, researchers have found other methods to create medicines which makes rhino avoid be killed by human. Another reason is that people have higher awareness of protecting animals. Lots of animal protectors refuse to use production that contain animal ingredient. It led to less killing and poaching for wild life creatures.
However, although less hunting have happened than in the past, it is still impossible to avoid animal production. For example, people need wool and duck feather to make overcoat. Also, because of raising cow, chicken and big, people can enjoy various kind of food such milk, egg and meat. These animals are just raised because of people needed. Moreover, although scientists have produced man-made meat successfully, it still need a long time to apply these methods in industry. So banning all animals enter in industry production is unrealistic.
In conclusion, my opinion is that human have no need to poach wild life or endangered species to get food or medicine, but we still need domestic animal to produce our necessities of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'replaced'.
Suggestion: replaced
...nce many productive processes have been replace by technology. However, there are still...
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Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...y agree that animals are less necessary in nowadays industrial process. One is because peop...
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Line 9, column 427, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'needs'?
Suggestion: needs
...ed man-made meat successfully, it still need a long time to apply these methods in i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24567474048 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6655234955 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60553633218 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3378587118 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1764705882 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182925874283 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656244191174 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566142350806 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114699763188 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280290285925 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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