In the modern world, it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via internet and live without any face to face contact with others. It is a positive or negative development in your opinion.
It is true that the development of internet make our lives more convenient and possible to shop, work or communicate without directly interaction. This issue triggers both advantages and disadvantages
There are several advantages. Firstly, it provides great assistance to hold strong relationship. People have just have a smartphone or a laptop been connected to the global network, they can communicate with their friends or the partners who are in different areas. The parents can make video calls with their children studying abroad easily. The distance is no difficulty to share information. Secondly, using internet make people reduce business expenses as well as reduce travel time. More and more e-commerce web is appeared, shoppers have plenty of choices from different providers. They can purchase whatever they want at anywhere with just a device connected with wi-fi, 3G or 4G technology. In addition, the effect of internet lead to have easy access to information resources. It’s no hard for people to fulfill their study and broaden their knowledge by joining in online course. Therefore, the internet has its advantages well
On the other hand, this development also causes the negative impacts. It is clearly that the interaction by face to face are in less and social communication skills are limited. In many families, people have more trouble in communication due to they have less time for eye to eye contact together. Moreover, the common phenomenon has happened that most people are internet addict. They spend all their free time on surfing internet, be glazier in physical activities such as sports,yoga, etc. it causes several negative mental health problems. Children are poor eyesight because of playing game online by smart phone all days
In conclusion, the internet is developed rapidly in our modern world. Although it has not only advantages but also disadvantages, it is believed that our lives more convenient via internet. People should consider how wise we use it to get more positive benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 482, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , yoga
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29938271605 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84830059207 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598765432099 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8781476128 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.85 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277239666409 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670781736282 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060596176884 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163680437657 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308330331944 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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