Money is important in most people’s lives. Although some people think it is more
important than others.
What do you feel are the right uses of money? What other factors are important for a good life?
Some people believe that money plays an essential role in lives, even though money is considered even more crucial than others, in some cases. However, it still depends on each person’s point of view. If they appreciate it seriously, they find it important and inverse. Thus, these questions are being discussed below.
Obviously, money is a foundation for humans’ daily lives. Yet, at least, we can pay for basic things such as clothes, food, houses, and service. It is hard to imagine life without money, people will fall into miserable situations, under the pressure of financial problems and rising children. But to some materialistic people, they want to enjoy life, squander money on luxury things such as treasure, sports car, brand stuff,… rather than necessary basic needs, so they found money more crucial than others because they perceive that money can buy everything. But, eventually, money is just a tool, despite having a lot of money we can’t buy the times, love, and happiness of a family. If we overuse money there may have repercussions. For instance, a family that relies solely on money might rapidly disintegrate in the unfortunate situation of the money running out.
Therefore, the value of money is undeniable but we have to be aware of the way to use it reasonably. . Some of the rich expense money to entertain while some people need it to withstand hard lives. In addition, people always want to show off about themselves. Even, they buy clothes that cost a million dollars without regrets. Money should be used for necessary demands, health care system, education. Particularly, authorities should support children who go into disadvantaged situations have opportunities to go to school or improve medical facilities for hospitals in the case of an epidemic outbreak. Charity funds are also encouraged a good utilization of money. Moreover, people should live a good modest life, learn how to save money, and use it in the right ways.
Overall, money is vital for human lives. But it is not everything, people shouldn’t focus too much on it. We need to treasure life because there are so many meaningful things in the world not just about money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, while, at least, for instance, in addition, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05248618785 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71104054458 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596685082873 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.9935143029 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1363636364 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04545454545 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325485025741 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874598700147 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604016495178 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19080615275 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358018573416 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.