the money spent by government on space programs would be better spent on vital public service schools and hospital to what extent do you agree or disagree
Authorities spend huge amount on space travel programs on the contrary these amount of cost used on public places as well as schools and hospitals. I completely agree with the aforementioned statement.
To commence with,there are several reason to waste this money firstly the government organised this kind of programs which are extremely expensive,due to fact that in this event also scientist as well as staff involved ,Apart from that programs related equipment also needed. One of the main fact that,these type of programs are not beneficial for ordinary individuals and do not help them. It is only a process which related to waste of huge amount of money. Among this, government should be prohibited this kind of programms.
On the other hand, lawmaker should we spend money to rebuild as well as read building to the public places like schools, temples as well as hospitals. due to fact that these places are mostly used by every alternatives according to their requirements. consequently government should be used a large amount of caused these types of services which are beneficial for people as well as human being. For example, we all use schools, hospitals, temples along with roads in every day our life. these places are not in good condition then individual face several type of problems. Moreover, those who do their job for governments they also improve respect in society . it is continue like this than ordinary individual also stand below in poverty as well as not given a better quality of life.
To recapitulate, I believe that this is totally a waste of money and the government also should be abundant as well as this money and used for good purposes for this amount as well as development of public places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, for example, in fact, kind of, as well as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95205479452 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72425080999 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7629707783 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.285714286 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142272371965 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518448952602 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338429458862 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100256289275 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173273319673 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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