Nowadays, most nations are facing the challenges of urbanisation which has soared significantly in astounding ways. This essay will first discuss the two principal effects of massive migration of rural population to cities and secondly, the effective resolutions of it with relevant examples.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.5 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 333 350
No. of Characters: 1884 1500
No. of Different Words: 219 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.272 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.658 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.053 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 155 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 123 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 89 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 67 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.98 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.315 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.563 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.025 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 779, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
... be the highest in the urban vicinities.Therefore, it ascertains why rapid urbanisation i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1949.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.87048192771 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24903119877 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668674698795 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.1043914275 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.416666667 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123035489478 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035527730444 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0248155532083 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0620212087109 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154922291549 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.06 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.16 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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